On this blog I will be demonstrating the methods that I have gone through in order to create my music video and ancillary products. Here I will store all my research, planning and drafting that I have done to create a successful product.
Clear to see where your product uses, develops and challenges conventions. There is a proficient discussion of theory throughout and how you product relates to them. Good discussion on the use of micro-elements, MES and character representation of your work which is supported well by existing media products. I like the way you discuss how and why you challenged the idea of the 'Male Gaze'. Proficient skill in the choice of form in which to present the evaluation question as it is detailed where required as well as illustrative too.
-when you discuss artist representation, try not to mix these ideas so your work is clear to read -slide 6, ensure you screenshot the right moments from your video -proof read
Clear to see where your product uses, develops and challenges conventions. There is a proficient discussion of theory throughout and how you product relates to them. Good discussion on the use of micro-elements, MES and character representation of your work which is supported well by existing media products. I like the way you discuss how and why you challenged the idea of the 'Male Gaze'. Proficient skill in the choice of form in which to present the evaluation question as it is detailed where required as well as illustrative too.
ReplyDelete-when you discuss artist representation, try not to mix these ideas so your work is clear to read
-slide 6, ensure you screenshot the right moments from your video
-proof read